Deboche's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sword Burn (incomplete)]

Finish it

Fbf is hard work but it looks good. Use it more and remove some useless tweens

Finish the movie, then submit it. And get a propper song. I'm not saying the song is bad but it's got nothing to do with the movie

And for your next movie, don't make it about samurais or anything that's been DONE BEFORE. Be creative

[Animation Tutorial 5]

More compliated

I loved all the tutorials so far. This one is a little more complicated but easy to understand

The only thing that you could improve is the music. it gets very annoying....

[The Little Match Girl]

Thanks

Merry christmas

I also have a flash comin up but its halfway done, I really wanted to submit it for christmas, even though its not really about chirstmas...

Anyway, I liked the movie and the drawings were good, it's obvious u put some effort there. You could have made it in black and white though and made it in a bigger window(cause bw takes less space)

And besides some obvious tweens the flash was pretty good, I did think that the sound could have been better cause it lacked a narrator.

RegisCartoons responds:

Thank you for the constructive review, Deboche. Thank you for all advices. Marry Xmas to you ! :)

[8-bit Theater 4]

Very cool

Great flash but it has a few flaws... You should put a % in the preloader, it gets frustrating to not know wether its almost done or not. And also, I think that last part of the casting and so kinda ruined it. You had a cool plot going and suddenly stopped it

I did like the spell book geek, very Simpson-like especially the voice. And the graphics were sweet. I didn't recognize all the sprites though. I'm gonna read some previous reviews to figure them out. Keep making these hella cool flashes

[Santa's Smokin' What?!]

Not bad

Great graphics and the song is cool but that's not what u act like on pot, not from my experience. Santa would most likely do all those things even more calmly and would take till February to deliver all the presents

cheshirepus responds:

Trust me, I know all about how people act when they're stoned... I've been around for a little while :)
You're supposed to get the feeling that his stuff is laced with something.
My bad.
Thanks for the good review though!

[Animation Tutorial 4 FX]

Another great one

Great tutorials man they're all on my favorites list

You could just have made a longer animation of the sparks at the end, like one of those birthday cake sticks that throw sparks all around just so we could really see the effect. All the rest is great

JackSmack responds:

Hey that's what I like to hear. Thanks for watching them all. Put some effort into them.

As far as the sparks.. yes I wasn't fully satisfied with the sparks but I'm giving a basic premise here... the style you come out with when you finish your own sparks is all you.

But ya the sparks do kinda look like pixie dust or something.

[Amatuer Invisibility: 2]

Unoriginal

I could see there was a lot of effort put into these flashes but come on...

A stick fight - seen hundreds of them, dont like them much

A guy who is depressed and cant kill himself - boring.....

Another guy who is depressed but kills himself - not the first or the hundreth videoclip I've seen with a guy killing himself

A DBZ like fight? I'm sure it was a LOT of hard work but I just thought it was boring, sorry

I did like the great lip synch in the song and I was originally enjoying Jstozak's work (the guy who thought he was ugly) but it turned out to be just like many other I've seen...

[Animation Tutorial 3]

More!

Keep em coming. Lip synch is one of the things I still haven't mastered so thanks a lot!

[Animation Tutorial 1]

Very cool

I do have on comment... A "Back" button wouldn't kill ya.....

JackSmack responds:

I'm already working on the 2nd one... and the first thing I put in was a back button... sorry for the oversight... MY BAD...

[Blanco y Negro]

Great!

If it really is your first, it rules. If it's not it still rules.